Ace had never felt so much pain than he did at that moment.
He leaned over on a boulder to stare at his morbid reflection in the pool.
Why did he have to be so stupid?
He was stuck there for eternity.
His one chance at living again was gone.
After so much time had passed, he did an impossible task,
Though it was hard to do since his chest ached.
Closing his eyes, he tried to rest for the remainder of eternity.
I like the mystery you have at the beginning of the story, the "how did he get there? what's going on?". Also, because there is really no ending, it makes the reader want to know even more. Good job!! *U*
ReplyDeleteI like the mystery you have at the beginning of the story, the "how did he get there? what's going on?". Also, because there is really no ending, it makes the reader want to know even more. Good job!! *U*
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